$50 tip if you make all changes to high standard Revisions for short Story: Content · Start the story with Cole already in Brazil, then explain the dilemma through dialogue with an extra character (below). o Show how hard his job is while he is in Brazil (e.g phone constantly ringing and countless emails, be sure to reference Law Jargon) · Also change the ending so that he doesn’t go back to the US, I.E keep the story in Brazil · Identify a fear or weakness of Cole and put him in a situation where he faces this, which exposes his character. (use dialogue) · Add a second significant character that interacts with Cole Pierce regularly, like a girlfriend or sibling. o This character should increase the conflict within the story to make it more realistic o Add conflict so that the ending is deserved (it could be, his brother or sister works 2 jobs and struggles paycheck to paycheck and Cole is just walking away from an extremely high paying job · Use dialogue to show instead of explaining the situation (throughout the story), scenes with interaction are extremely powerful o An example of this is the interaction between Cole and William on pages 8 and 9, carry this throughout the story · When transitioning to a new scene it is critical to have something that grounds the new scene. Immediate grounding is key. · Make the run up to the ending problematic so the ending is deserved. Format · Add line breaks when using dialogue (new line for dialogue) · Use space breaks between scenes to identify them.
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